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Vodalus

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on: August 24, 2006, 08:53:06 am
Hello, first post :). Trying out a new style with these- is it too basic? C+C very welcome.





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EDIT: Changed from jpeg to png.
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Re: New

Reply #1 on: August 24, 2006, 08:58:41 am
Hi, welcome to Pixelopolis!
Your main problem seems to be that you saved em as JPG,
save as Gif or Png  :)
I think it's indead too basic. It needs thinner lines,
and some shading.

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Re: New

Reply #2 on: August 24, 2006, 12:46:18 pm
Try and avoid that stepping effect you have, it's really obviously on the big blue sword, you dont need the extra pixel inside the outline, get rid of it, it'll look much better. Save em as gifs like Shadow mentioned, sort out your lineart then we can talk about colours.