I had to do something because what you are doing, is drawing yourself in a physical way which you are not, and as Jad said, idealizing.
If you posted a more recent picture, we could help you a little more, but I think I'm not far off with my edit since the face doesn't change much over some years (atleast you lost a ton of weigth)
Your eyes arn't even green so I don't know what's going on...
In the all above edits, your hair can't even be like this, because you have a barely visible receding hairline...
IF you were intending to made an ideal portrait, a reflection of your life, then you would not pick merely stuff that "looks" cool, hence my question "why did you pick green"
And for your counteradvice saying that it would help more if I made a list...I think no list can tell as much as an edit, by all means.
And as side note, I am not defending my edit nor intending to be insultive