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komirad
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Tiles/Buildings I made long ago
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November 05, 2010, 02:02:06 am
I made an isometric engine in flash a few years ago.
This were the tiles i made for it:
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questseeker
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Re: Tiles/Buildings I made long ago
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November 05, 2010, 09:03:29 am
An overall nice and coherent set of objects, with disparate issues:
Extreme pillow shading in the trees. Even if the interior is appropriately noisy, the dark green outline and the specular highlight make them look like hard plastic toys.
All doors and buildings are far too small compared to the tent on the far right. Don't you want your windows larger than 1 pixel?
Black clusters in the left and right inner corners of the top building and behind the gables of the left building. I think you should try to draw the buildings without outlines, reclaiming a lot of space for parts that are about as wide as the outlines; the shading seems already right, except for the strange presence of the lighter grey on the presumably darker gabled side of the roof of the left building.
The fringe of light brown sand or dirt around the pond is too uniform, both in thickness and in hue, and unrealistically simple.
Your tile shapes are mismatched, as the irregular black hole makes evident.
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