Khris: oh sorry, i thought you meant the perspective. You're totally right, something was bothering me about the lips and you figured it out. The chin and area around the mouth are a bit too extremely changed in your edit, it's a bit more "girl+pretty"-fied (but not too much), i'll try to come up with something similar, correct but keeping the anatomy i had in mind... and the hauntedness
. Thanks.
Malor and Doppleganger: nice to hear it freaks you guys a bit, it's the intended purpose
I'll try to keep it freaky while somewhat more anatomically correct the next time.
On the hair, i'm trying to come up with something in between, pasty and oily while not as sculpture looking. But always keeping that original look in mind. Thanks for the comments.
edit:
Hope i've addressed these issues. The mouth/lip thing is subtle but i think is fixed. The top hair area is kind of muddled, but i'm not going to touch it anymore. Sick of hair for now
edit 2: people at pixeljoint critted the chin, i changed it a bit: