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Jungles spirit
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February 25, 2006, 08:23:08 am
Hello fellow pixeler'z
I haven't pixeld anything in a really long time, and wanted to get back to the grove …
I'm quite happy with it; C+c is very welcomed
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Opacus
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Entangled
Re: Jungles spirit
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February 25, 2006, 08:39:32 am
Some anatomy problems here. (Unless they are intentional.)
His chest is about two times the normal size, it sucks
up his whole body.
And his legs are too small.
Maybe give it a higher contast?
And I'm not sure about the black outlines.
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Re: Jungles spirit
Reply #2 on:
February 25, 2006, 11:20:36 am
Thanks Shadow Wolf for the respond!
I made quick edit with ur crtis!
I fixed the chest!
fixed the leg and made them bigger!
Add one more color for the pants !
anyone else have some c+C and thanks Shadow Wolf again
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Andy Tran
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Re: Jungles spirit
Reply #3 on:
February 25, 2006, 11:49:39 pm
The black outlines could be avoided to smooth him out. Not to avoid the black outlines by removing it, but by replacing them with sel out will help.
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Dhaos
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Re: Jungles spirit
Reply #4 on:
February 26, 2006, 12:12:05 am
Hmm, I think he could use a lot more contrast. Consider darkening his two darkest skins tones a bit. Its > foot also seems smaller than his < foot =X. Besides those points, its a nice piece.
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Re: Jungles spirit
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February 26, 2006, 06:56:43 am
andy: I'll see about your point!
dhaos: thanks!
I'm glad you liked the piece, and so i made an edit considering your cirtis.
I made much contrast on the skintone
I fixed the leg to match the left one .
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