xndsuicndisdpcducduc when will you attempt a traditional pixel art piece? At a normal size, or at least start trying to do refined pieces that demonstrate more of the "essence" of pixel art.
The background is just pointless other than for setting a color mood, the narrative of the picture is undeveloped completely, the splotches of color are distracting.
You really need to tighten your work and start working towards pieces that demonstrate tight, attractive pixels.
TPK's piece here
http://www.pixeljoint.com/pixelart/72217.htm# is of similar style to you, but demonstrates the control and development that you lack and should push towards.