That's much better! You've improved from a inconsistantly formed face to a quite realistic one. When you follow the basics of anatomy construction, you move away from the amateur/begginer look into something solid. Anatomy study, as with everything, is a continuous process, so there's always the need to keep at it, even if you're not aiming to become an expert.
There's still some room for improvement. Suggest the bone that connects the nose to the cheeks horizontally; draw upper and lower eyelids (the upper one could be a just a dark line above the eye, the lower should be a vertical line that goes from eye to cheek).
Smooth the lower cheek to make her appear younger (as i think was your initial purpose). Smoothen the connection from jaw to neck (you can suggest it with just a light shade rather than go to the darkest shades to say "there's a jaw here".
If she's using eyeshadow, use a different color than a skin shade to indicate it.