Thanks
I really like what you did, I will make sure Ill have a look at them, take them into account and reshape my figure
Only thing I don't really like is what you did with the face, I preferred my version of it
That's perfectly OK, I was just confused as to why you put the mouth so high up on the face, because his jaw looked a bit big to me. But it's a matter of choice.
And sorry for not explaining the changes, here you go.
First change: Fleshed him out a bit, and made him look more 3-dimensional. In the animation (thanks Monsoon
) You can see him bulging in and out.
Second change: Made his pecs a bit more evenly sized, and fleshed them out too. Reduced his left shoulder muscle, it looked like a tumor. Made his legs connect further down, to give him a pelvis.
Third change: Forget it.
Can I also suggest that you use less colors? If you have two colors that are very similar (I saw examples of this in your work), make them one color. It's sort of a waste.