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Pixel Art / Re: Master Kame
« on: September 14, 2009, 08:12:49 pm »
There are lots of jagged lines that would look better with a touch of AA, you should be able to do that with the colors you already have.
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Pixel Art / Re: [WIP] Rob The Squirrel - Little platforming game
« on: September 14, 2009, 08:05:50 pm »
I think it looks like he's moving the leg and arm on the same side forward at the same time, which is a very, very weird way to run. Try to make the legs easier to tell apart.
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Pixel Art / Re: [WIP] Lil' Red
« on: September 06, 2009, 07:12:38 am »
9 colors, but I only see about 6. You need more contrast, or you could remove a few unnecessary colors.
Also, the body structure looks off, especially the legs. They're too short and look like they could break any second.
Also, the body structure looks off, especially the legs. They're too short and look like they could break any second.
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General Discussion / Re: GraphicsGale alpha channels
« on: September 03, 2009, 05:16:35 pm »
The easy way is to just make a layer with a transparent background by layer properties, much easier.
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Pixel Art / Re: Galactic Garden
« on: June 25, 2009, 02:31:37 pm »
Will the background get some black outlines like the old one? The alien stands out too much from the backround due to his black lines IMO.
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Pixel Art / Re: Monster Girl
« on: June 24, 2009, 09:07:20 am »
There's an awful lot of colors. Her legs are so thin and footless, I don't see how she can stand, and the arms look very short too (but I know it's a cartoony style so I won't change it.)
I'm not very good at this, but here's an edit.
What I did in my edit:
Added contrast, and some volumes to make it look less flat.
Reduced the colors to 29, which is still alot.
Tried to fix some of the AA and banding, but I suck at that.
Tried to fix the focus more on the girl and less on the shrooms.
I'm not very good at this, but here's an edit.
What I did in my edit:
Added contrast, and some volumes to make it look less flat.
Reduced the colors to 29, which is still alot.
Tried to fix some of the AA and banding, but I suck at that.
Tried to fix the focus more on the girl and less on the shrooms.
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Pixel Art / Re: old pic,a girl.
« on: June 23, 2009, 11:15:32 am »
Very nice.
Crits: Her skin and bra lack contrast, the shading looks rushed and doesn't really fit the shapes/volumes. And there are jags, especially on the spear, apply some AA.
I wish I could zoom in, but my browser messes up the pixels.
Just going in a thread and writing "haha nice~" or "where?" should be bannable. Both these people made themselves look like asses with their very first post. Way to go.
Crits: Her skin and bra lack contrast, the shading looks rushed and doesn't really fit the shapes/volumes. And there are jags, especially on the spear, apply some AA.
I wish I could zoom in, but my browser messes up the pixels.
Just going in a thread and writing "haha nice~" or "where?" should be bannable. Both these people made themselves look like asses with their very first post. Way to go.
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Pixel Art / Re: dump time
« on: June 15, 2009, 05:25:09 pm »
The board looks slippery, his foot wouldn't be able to slide/turn like that. It looks really weird.
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Pixel Art / Re: [WIP] - Forum Logotype
« on: June 10, 2009, 05:37:31 pm »
The colors and the way you connect the g to the f makes it look like it says unoforum. A forum about uno, wow!
Anyway, the g on the new one doesn't work either, and the color shifts make no sense at all.
I might have some educational stuff about this subject laying around somewhere. If so, i'll upload it.
Anyway, the g on the new one doesn't work either, and the color shifts make no sense at all.
I might have some educational stuff about this subject laying around somewhere. If so, i'll upload it.
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Pixel Art / Re: Eleckid
« on: June 06, 2009, 10:41:36 am »
Where'd the contrast go???
Also, you still have that angular shading I mentioned before. Makes his body look pointy.
Also, you still have that angular shading I mentioned before. Makes his body look pointy.