as far as MadWord, the screenshots say it all. They need to need to need to get their shaders sorted and look at the inspiration. When you look at comic books, at least, the good ones, there's usually a figure on a ground no matter how you spin it. even as busy as they come you still have a bright character against a dark ground. sure, there's a LOT of meaningless grit involved too (as in many art forms), but when i look at their screens, i don't have a clue what's going on or what the action is. It's a bold move but it's going to fail visually if they don't put some more effort in.
[with a british accent haha]
Helm, have you thought of making a voice over version [with a british accent haha]? It's kinda distracting reading and watching the critique at the same time
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