Thanks everybody!
I was thinking a pen too, with... Like a sword point coming out or something...
A special thanks to AdamAtomic for making me realize my mistakes, and although the crit was harsh, I think it will help me in the long run. Thanks again!
Well I converted it to "pixel" size, I have 15 colors in the palette, but only 6 in the drawing. I will start the AA and shading asap.
I also did an overhaul on the pose, making it more proportional and anatomically correct, I do realize there are some mistakes, but just tell me what's wrong with the pose, and I'll try to fix it. I admit I'm a noob, so my stuff isn't pleasing to look at, but y'alls crits will help me along the way to my dream!
Don't take his face too seriously