thanks, i was trying to go for a western comic feel with the lines, but if style gets in the way of appeal, then style must die. That and you are right, i should clean them
ill fix the shin when i know whats up with it ^^
one question i have, since all of the color mixes were intentionally placed (and the bad ones were removed), which in particular do you not think work? i consider you god of all things hue shift, so if you say its wrong, then i need to change it, the problem is that i dont know whats wrong about it (which is why i put the colors there in the first place)
ignorance is sobering >.<
ill post an edit once i get a couple more suggestions here and on the joint
thanks for taking the time to offer advice