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Another Jelly :D

on: February 28, 2009, 11:39:34 am
first try on animating (it kinda sucks i think)  :-[
so here it is



inspirated by jad's avatar and another guy I dont know exact the name of.
cc pls

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Re: Another Jelly :D

Reply #1 on: February 28, 2009, 12:02:06 pm
The outline seems a tad messy/jagged.. The mouth probably needs some AA to make the movement more smooth looking. And the other parts of its body should be shifting too IMO, not just it's mouth :P

I'd say you have a pretty good start though. :y:

But I'm pretty new here myself and no pro at pixelling.

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Re: Another Jelly :D

Reply #2 on: February 28, 2009, 12:10:59 pm
man my cubes screwed. i think you should flatten the top, looks more like its been steam rolled or something, raise him up, make him more cube-ee, but then again mines not very cube-like anyway.

you should be more inspiring from alkalines avatar,

just let me dish it out.

« Last Edit: February 28, 2009, 12:19:01 pm by balls01 »

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Re: Another Jelly :D

Reply #3 on: February 28, 2009, 12:35:18 pm
yes it was his ava wich inspirated me (in your treath) thnx now i know the name :p

I don't want to make it like a cube else it looks to much on alkalines avatar and I want have some unique in it
So thats why i made it look like this shape

@ petas
I'm not that good in AA but ill sure give it a try and ill try to animate the whole jelly move as you suggested (I guess you mean like in Alkalines avatar?)
« Last Edit: February 28, 2009, 12:38:55 pm by aregon810 »

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Re: Another Jelly :D

Reply #4 on: February 28, 2009, 01:16:34 pm
I don't want to make it like a cube else it looks to much on alkalines avatar and I want have some unique in it
So thats why i made it look like this shape

no offence, but i think thats just an excuse not to edit the shape. right now... it does look really bad. please do edit the shape. maybe dont do the bouncy jiggle but the smooth-wavy-thing-o that jad had once made an original of until i came along.

i tried a little 4 frame jad moving cube. maybe you could try somethin like this. this would be sweet finished.
« Last Edit: February 28, 2009, 01:33:03 pm by balls01 »

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Re: Another Jelly :D

Reply #5 on: February 28, 2009, 01:54:17 pm
I haven't tought of that. your animation looks amazing and gives my idea's however i've to re-do everything. But it wil it worth.
thnx ill remake it soon (when i got time) perhaps tomorow start with it or mabey even later today.

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Re: Another Jelly :D

Reply #6 on: February 28, 2009, 03:10:21 pm
If you want to be unique, how about a different shape? Personally I've thought of a rolly/bouncy cylinder type jello, I think that would be cool. Don't think I'm great enough to make it happen yet, though.

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Re: Another Jelly :D

Reply #7 on: February 28, 2009, 06:47:03 pm
I'm not that good in AA but ill sure give it a try and ill try to animate the whole jelly move as you suggested (I guess you mean like in Alkalines avatar?)

I was thinking the subtle shifting more like that outline balls01 posted, and AA like his and jad's avatar since that seems to be more of the style you're going for :)

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Re: Another Jelly :D

Reply #8 on: March 01, 2009, 09:43:09 am


so what about this? is this a better form or is it to big?
« Last Edit: March 01, 2009, 09:51:06 am by aregon810 »

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Re: Another Jelly :D

Reply #9 on: March 01, 2009, 10:50:59 am
It looks good, but more like glass than jello.
Soften up the edges and add a shine to it.

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Re: Another Jelly :D

Reply #10 on: March 01, 2009, 11:10:32 am
first try on AA + softed the edges?


how is the AA?
I think self its not that good viseble so when i go for the Jad's avatar efect it wont realy work?

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Re: Another Jelly :D

Reply #11 on: March 01, 2009, 11:11:01 am

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Re: Another Jelly :D

Reply #12 on: March 01, 2009, 11:46:22 am
i've already seen the topic but didn't seen that much information wich could help me. thnx anyway.



Edit:I know i should've made it smaller =/ the animation wont work now :(
« Last Edit: March 01, 2009, 01:50:18 pm by aregon810 »

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Re: Another Jelly :D

Reply #13 on: March 01, 2009, 02:20:14 pm
its too perfect to fit the style i think. i mean its more a opacity-ized cube more than a jello cube thats squishy and yummy looking. it looks more realistic also. thats if your going for the effect i suggested, im not sure what your trying to achieve anymore

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Re: Another Jelly :D

Reply #14 on: March 01, 2009, 04:39:21 pm
i don't understand, why wasn't the first one good? it had a lot more personality

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Re: Another Jelly :D

Reply #15 on: March 01, 2009, 05:01:05 pm
i don't understand, why wasn't the first one good? it had a lot more personality
hrmm. true, his style his piece. but, it doesnt really comprehend with anything that me nor jad did. except theres a love heart in it. thats in my eyes... that does sound kinda rude... whoopsies if it offends :-[

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Re: Another Jelly :D

Reply #16 on: March 01, 2009, 05:40:14 pm
I like the shape of the first one, if it was cleaned up it would be neat, a sort of demented jelly