Since it's a continuation of the previous piece, I think it's best to put it in the same thread. If you report your own post, the mods will merge the threads.
The near shoulder had a nice light on it in the still version, it's a shame you didn't keep it. The rimlight-like light spot there doesn't make any sense. Ditto for the other shoulder, but that one was always like that.
The chest seems to drop a lot, but the head and shoulders hardly move. The torso would have to rotate forward for the chest to eclipse the abs, which means they would appear to come down a lot. If that's not what you're going for, then the pecs shouldn't move so much downward (maybe not at all).