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2D & 3D / Re: Official OT-Creativity Thread 2
« on: November 02, 2009, 11:33:16 pm »
just an eye i was doodling :|
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I should just point out that the rightmost of your reference images is definitely airbrushed, and the middle probably is airbrushed. As the difference in body shape before/after airbrushing can be fairly extreme, I think you need to select references that you can verify are un-airbrushed.
The head is not the problem, it's the hair. It looks like the hair is just hugging the head shape so closely that it makes her head look really small. I also advice you to listen to the crits in this thread more. People will not be helping you with the shading if the lines aren't satisfactory.
I'd drop the dither btw, it looks way too grainy. Skin dithering only works with very smooth palettes, yours is pretty rough.
I like the concepts.
The jet flames look like wagging tales rather than flame. Green in center seems an odd choice.
The turtle is riding a shell, but what does the fox have, I can't tell.
Bee wing animation makes no sense. They flap slowly like bird wings. I assume nothing but a lightning fast motion blur will do here. If the bee was thrusting his stinger forward instead of positioned with it pointing backwards it would look more threatening. Are they mechanical?