Thanks for that edit Terley, I really like lots of what you changed, especially the pick and jackhammer arm. Others have said the pose is off too. Guess I really should change it, but no one seems to get that the body lean and leg position is meant to be based on the weight of the pack. On your edit, it looks like you were going for a wider stance, but it kind of reads to me like the leg has moved forward, rather than just wider, and that would make him fall backwards because of the pack weight.