Heres Yo edit:
As you can see in the top right i kinda drew what i assume hes doing (in profile)
Some fixes i made were (excluding the gesture which i didnt touch cuz thats a bit too much for a quick edit, especially this late in the game)
-Shortened the torso (torso was super long)
-Lengthened the legs (they felt a bit short only a pixel or two though)
-Changed the yellows (the yellow you were using before especially on the shirt was just playing with fire. I wouldnt recommend a colour like that. For one its gross and unnatural, for two its impossible to shade nice ((kinda))
-Fixed arms (broadened shoulders)
-Tried to fix the folds a bit in the pants (didnt worry about shirt) if you look up actual jeans for reference youll see what i was trying to do (assuming those are khakis or jeans of some sort)
I didnt bother with the hair cuz to be honest it was kinda a mess. Choose your pixels better please (just play with em till theyre pretty ((thats what i do
))) Also the way the hair is shaded is a bit unlike hair. Not sure how to fix it but maybe better identify the shading on the hair rather than kinda just outlining it like you did a bit.
Nice work/rendering on your thing good character too
« Last Edit: November 24, 2015, 12:22:32 am by IrresponsibleFreelancer »
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I dont get it done, but when i do its not done.