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Flem1000
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[Feedback] Little Coconut Creature
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February 04, 2018, 09:46:21 am
So one of my friends told me that this looked like a cookie.
But it's supposed to be a coconut. Anything i can do to make it more coconut-like?
Or tho any feedback for this thing is appreciated!
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Hoogo
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Re: [Feedback] Little Coconut Creature
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February 04, 2018, 10:26:12 am
Maybe you could try to have the three holes closer to one another and more on top of the coconut (edit: if you made the highlight smaller I think your character would look less flat
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Flem1000
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Re: [Feedback] Little Coconut Creature
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February 04, 2018, 10:29:50 am
Yeah, maybe. :/
But it just looks wierd when they are closer
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Last Edit: February 04, 2018, 10:31:24 am by Flem1000
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Hoogo
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Re: [Feedback] Little Coconut Creature
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February 04, 2018, 11:02:53 am
I don't know if this is what you're looking for or if you like it but I edited your character a little:
Hope that can help
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Flem1000
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Re: [Feedback] Little Coconut Creature
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February 04, 2018, 11:10:27 am
Hmm...It does certainly look less like a cookie. But i don't know if i like the shadows very much. Maybe i'll do something similar actually.
Thx for the edit!
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Hoogo
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Re: [Feedback] Little Coconut Creature
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February 04, 2018, 11:13:58 am
My pleasure!
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Flem1000
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Re: [Feedback] Little Coconut Creature
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February 04, 2018, 11:17:38 am
So I actually went with more shadow, and I like it. I think it looks less like a cookie now.
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Hoogo
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Re: [Feedback] Little Coconut Creature
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February 04, 2018, 11:23:47 am
You're right, it certainly looks less flat!
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