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Topic: Space Trooper + First Monstar (Read 18841 times)
Stwelin
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Re: Space Trooper + First Monstar
Reply #40 on:
April 14, 2007, 02:47:34 pm
To me it just looks like webbing between the upper and lower 'lips.' The same sort of thing that appears on dinosaur's mouths, i guess, that sort of thing?
(
http://www.chrisglass.com/journal/images/canadian_dinosaur.jpg
) < you can see it a little here.
It doesn't read very well though.
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Xion
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Re: Space Trooper + First Monstar
Reply #41 on:
April 14, 2007, 06:48:52 pm
My guess was the same as Stwelin's. I think you should just get rid of it. It doesn't fit at all, and it's hard to tell what it is.
That said, the new one fits the style much better.
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Sherman Gill
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Re: Space Trooper + First Monstar
Reply #42 on:
April 15, 2007, 02:00:42 am
Hmm, yes, Stwelin and Xion were right.
Here's an idle:
Think it's done?
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Quote from: ndrake on July 25, 2008, 03:37:32 pm
Oh yes naked women are beautiful
But I like shrimps more haha
eck
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But why is RUM gone???
Re: Space Trooper + First Monstar
Reply #43 on:
April 15, 2007, 11:42:25 am
muuuuuuuch better. i think this one has just the right amount of animation.
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Sherman Gill
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Re: Space Trooper + First Monstar
Reply #44 on:
April 17, 2007, 02:45:31 am
Normal-speed run cycle for the Poligan, the first monster. It's pretty close to the idle since I used that to cut down on the truly tedious work of moving 14 pixels with only a general idea of what I'm doing on each frame
Slower than Moe:
I consider run animations my weak point, so... Adivce?
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Quote from: ndrake on July 25, 2008, 03:37:32 pm
Oh yes naked women are beautiful
But I like shrimps more haha
Fool
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Re: Space Trooper + First Monstar
Reply #45 on:
April 17, 2007, 06:45:53 am
I'd suggest to give it a a bit more leg action.=)
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Sherman Gill
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Re: Space Trooper + First Monstar
Reply #46 on:
April 17, 2007, 07:07:39 am
Alas, I am ridden with jealousy Fool. Like most of the things I animate, I lost track of my original goal and took simpler routes, but your animation is exactly, or at the very least, insanely close to how I wanted it before.
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Quote from: ndrake on July 25, 2008, 03:37:32 pm
Oh yes naked women are beautiful
But I like shrimps more haha
Sherman Gill
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Re: Space Trooper + First Monstar
Reply #47 on:
April 22, 2007, 01:49:03 am
Hrmm.
Here's a new run animation, and a revised idle:
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Quote from: ndrake on July 25, 2008, 03:37:32 pm
Oh yes naked women are beautiful
But I like shrimps more haha
philipptr
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Re: Space Trooper + First Monstar
Reply #48 on:
April 22, 2007, 08:27:01 am
imho the timing of the idleanimation is too fast. if I try to breath like that it makes me feel like I have run quite a distance before
making it a bit slower and increasing the time between the breaths should fix it I guess.
Otherwise nice, especially the running animation.
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Sherman Gill
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Re: Space Trooper + First Monstar
Reply #49 on:
June 01, 2007, 07:01:46 am
BITE!
Still working on it. Unhappy with the way the front leg moves and the jiggly bits on his head look a bit odd.
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Quote from: ndrake on July 25, 2008, 03:37:32 pm
Oh yes naked women are beautiful
But I like shrimps more haha
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