Lol, thanks sharprm, I kinda like you you folded the edges of the characters neck, and made it look like there was a sorta neck bone type thing, I like urs eyes and stuff too, thanks I kinda based my sprite off of three things actually....one was my first sketch, two was the blue guy, and 3 was cloud...
EDIT: Ok, I am really starting to like how he looks....here he is: