Good work so far, you could try playing around with the palette, the greens against the brick's color looks a bit odd, I really like color though so what's too pale for me doesn't mean bad. For the girls animation her head needs to move, side to side slightly and with a little bobbing as she goes, other than that it's quite smooth. Maybe make her hair a tad longer/with a flick at the end to help distinguish her as a girl, it's not extremely feminine atm. The odd plant in the middle looks like it defies gravity, a bit too gangly and straight edged to look organic and like it could support itself.

Yeah the bouncing is smooth too, really tidy animation besides the static head - great job there

Thanks guys, for the edit and ref also - v. helpful.



In this one I tried to better the lines, making the shape a little less glass like. 2 new colors for highlighting and I redid the static wibbly-ness.

I think I might need to be more extreme on my chubby corners, they look more like bad pixelling atm.

The balloon looks stretched horizontally, not very natural looking, thin it or increase the height should do the trick. I think we should be seeing more back, the shoulder/back area is difficult to read. Coming along very nicely, like the 'crayon'-esque color scheme

Definite massive improvements especially in latest update. No longer phallus-like and I much prefer the texture/patters on his skin. The face is much better and meaner now, the original was quite innocent looking. Perhaps the muscle tone on his back leg could be accentuated more to balance the definition on the front?