Thanks a lot for your comprehensive feedback which is much more than "your two-cents", haha.

I edited the GUI a little bit. It was of course not sorted yet since I was not sure if I am going really to implement it, but I guess so.
About the HP, the number is just secondary. The bloodbag would lower it's volume when the girls gets hit.
Increasing the number size would look weird. I do not want to let the GUI be in the focus though. Any suggestions?

On the game-wise side, I was thinking about much more freedom: The player can decide which of these GUI-Parts should be displayed and also which GUI-Parts should only display if they reach a certain value (dangerous-mark).

The ammo had infinite bullets due the idea of the loop. She would camp there while the animation repeats and repeats. However I changed it now (the number is still to be edited), to represent the threat of survival she is in. Thanks for this hint! Infinite sounds pretty "overpowered" and "boring" - specially in a survival.

I am missing the the thirsty GUI but I do not know how to display being thirsty. First thought: A plant in a pot.
The idea is funny but when I looked at it, it was more like "meh". Maybe I have to reorganize on this. I tried using the cut-view into the plants inner being and filling this with water.
But this feels not good and is not really expressing the need of water.
Making the plant dry feels maybe too unique in comparison to the other GUI-parts and too hard to predictable.

Also the brain is containing the sleep-meter, too. I guess this is okay.
There are also plenty of other ideas for the upper part of the GUI. Plasters, painkillers, ... all kind of usable items.



As for the monster: I edited it. Made it bigger and scarier. More blood, more bones, and better shading.
At the moment I am also working on its appearance. I got a little animated example for this.

First there is nothing. Just the girl heard something from the rather silent night.
Then something attacks the door. The door gets strongly damaged and then, after another attack, a monstrous blade (made out of bone?) shines through.
The light turns off. I might add a lamp, working and then stopping to work. I need to change the window-light-management, if I want to go for this idea.
Maybe removing the right window or letting it be nailed with planks?
The light returns, maybe rather powered by a short lightning than the lamp itself.
From this lightning the monster can be seen and it will start to try to attack the girl.



This is just a rough "sketch" animation to visualize the main idea. The first frame, when the door starts to break, is way too fast, of course.
I mentioned the rest already, though (concerning lighting).

Thanks for reading! I would really like to hear your thoughts or to see your edits (if needed to visualize your ideas)!

Thank you for your feedback, Phlakes! It is true that the character is quite bright. Originally she was meant to stand in the light but I guess this is not gonna happen anymore.
But the lighting is not from nowhere. The lighting actually comes from the left.
I will have to make my mind up about this. Because one problem is the readability. You mentioned the priority problems already: If I would use the idea of your edit, she would probably drown in the piece again.
Also what astraldata recommended, to lower the contrast, is still an interesting idea. On the other hand I feel like it works even without lowering the contrast.
But I see that the ideas about the contrast are stacking up so I probably need to do something about it.

However I tried to show what I meant on this following picture - placing her into a light ray. She does not fit completely into it.

I also added a GUI, just as a test for now. Does it look okay or does it even destroy the picture?
Though I really wanted to try this idea out:




The usual one but with GUI:



And without GUI:

So, I did some edits and also started animating the whole thing.
Sadly it feels really hard for me to change the contrast of it without destroying this certain feeling it gives me - I would appreciate to see an edit of your's, AstralData
And of course I am still looking for more opinion about the contrast and the general piece.

This is the static one, without animation:


Here is the animation:


It is of course only the base for the shooting and not completely worked into the progress. I still need to create the Zombie/Monster, the opening door, and so on.
Without these it would be pointless to perfectly adjust the shooting now.

I also did some changes on the table and improve the line direction !

Thank you all!

I made some edits and tried to cover up all mentioned things.


On this one, I tried to make the contrasts much stronger. The character would stand in the light in the end.


The usual way it would look.

I might change the door, too.
Do you think the contrast is too strong?
The warm colors were eliminated. I like the new ones more. They express the night much better and have this cold breeze feeling which is laying in the air - just as a metaphor of course
Also I added some dither to the light beams.

Additionally I tried to fix the angle of the arm - rather adding the elbow. Also focused more on the volume than the outline, as astraldata, recommended.
Good tip! However I need to get used to this way of creating first, haha.

This so much at once. Next time I will go for a scenery I will twice about it.

Some small changes. I tried to draw her back "into" her body while bottom is rounding up to this point. How it should be since she is holding her right leg into the front, which is moving her bottom to the side a little bit.


I cannot change the total back line since she is standing straight. Nobody would bow forwards to shoot due some distorting chances - I guess.

I could stress her backline much more, so I would dot into her.


The lighting is making me totally crazy. Since it is all from the angle, there should be different points of collision on the ground.
Then I thought about something much more problematic. Since light is entering the inner of the building via a geometric form the light wont enlighten the wall. So I would have to make the wall all in dark, should not I?
Due this form I should also change the look of the colliding point fitting to the entering form?