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Pixel Art / Re: how to fix
« on: October 31, 2017, 07:37:30 pm »
hello there again, i have been trying the 3D thing of the skirt (seeing it as a cone) with another of my characters. it's my first pixel art which i have been trying to improve today. i will also show how it looked before. it took me quite long, i have been trying to do it several ways but i couldn't manage to get it right still.. i have spend like 6 hours on only experimenting with the skirt.



what do u think??

edit: cone exercise

tried the cone with the skirt now:

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Pixel Art / Re: how to fix
« on: October 30, 2017, 07:11:26 pm »
hello. i have tried the dress first. but i don't think my version looks so good..


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Pixel Art / Re: Mushroom monster
« on: October 27, 2017, 06:29:16 pm »
hahaha i really love that u gave him a book. why don't they make love reacts/likes in this forum? edit: instead they should make hugs or something. i remember a forum that had hugs as reaction material, that would be nice. also sorry for being off topic.

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Pixel Art / Re: how to fix
« on: October 27, 2017, 06:08:33 pm »
wow you really made good edits on the dress and hair. tho idk the shape of the face i don't really like XDD i am going to try it myself soon, however i am a bit tired of pixelating and failing so i was planning to take a break.

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Unpaid Work / Re: Need musician/composer
« on: October 23, 2017, 08:50:49 am »
have you tried posting on indieDB? this is a pixel art forum so i don't think there are much people here who even have the ability to compose good music. i am not a composer either XDD when i posted on indieDB for my game for composers i got a lot of emails, so you can basically just pick. most of them are also able to make sound effects.

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Pixel Art / Re: New Artstyle,
« on: October 22, 2017, 01:59:33 pm »
OMG i think this looks rly cool actually XDD i sent u a pm, wondered if you got it because i don't see it in my sent messages, i think it's a bug in pixelation but not sure. anyway, i love the animation too!! but the shadow of the friend yes i was thinking it looks kinda like it's also inside his body or sth

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Pixel Art / Re: how to fix
« on: October 22, 2017, 01:30:04 pm »
However, none of these new versions address the worst issues:
You're not thinking about lighting. What's your light source? What's the imagined 3D form that the light is hitting, where can it reach (lit parts), and where can it not reach (shadows)? You seem to be placing your darker colours through some logic other than light/shadow.

For example, is that a nose or a cheek?

The clothing doesn't make a lot of sense. It could be something real technically, but it doesn't look it, and as a result looks like a mistake. What is the big blue thing, how does it attach? Why does the skirt have a corner on the bottom? What are the white triangles on the skirt?


A nitpick I have is that you have outlines that are lighter than the colours they're containing. This can give an interesting, surreal look, but is generally something you want to avoid.


Another minor issue, not with the pixel art, but with the character design: The choice of blue elements on the dress isn't an effective one, in my opinion. Since everything else is purple, the blue parts stand out and look important... but why are they important? Colours that are used infrequently but are still very easy to notice generally become "accent colours", drawing attention to themselves. You can use this to your advantage by highlighting the important parts of the character, but here it seems you chose the blue without thinking about it. In the earlier draft, it wasn't as noticeable because the blue was so similar to the purple.
Consider making the blue here more of a cool purple. That way you'll still have some interesting colour variation, but it won't stand out as much.

OK. i tried to fix the lighting with some help.



it's a nose i hope it makes sense now, also the thing below her skirt is frills but i wasn't sure how to make them because lack of space!!

i also changed the blue to more purple.

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Pixel Art / Re: how to fix
« on: October 21, 2017, 11:55:55 am »

does this look better?
or this:

or this:

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Pixel Art / how to fix
« on: October 13, 2017, 05:20:26 pm »
hello guys i have been working hours on making this character better but i can't manage to fix it. i am not very good in pixel art and i am trying to improve. i hoped you guys have any advice on how to do this.

i don't like the knees i made and i am not sure about the dress. i do like the hair and face i made a little but feedback is welcome.



a tiny change in the eyes

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well i played it ages ago and it was definitely my favourite zelda game

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