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WIP, ravenholm
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October 09, 2008, 12:42:30 pm
Definately a WIP. I neither know what to add, or what to take away, But it's definately a WIP.
Anyway, it feels incomplete, and i need some advice, and maybe a couple of edits.
based off of the ravenholm level in valve's half life 2.
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Re: WIP, ravenholm
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October 09, 2008, 12:55:25 pm
Before thinking about taking this any further in terms of technical execution I think you should focus on getting the mood right. Ravenholm was first and foremost fucking scary.
There is nothing even remotely suggesting a scary atmosphere in your version.
As far as the sprites go I would say drop the white outlines and make the zombies less upright and slouching a bit. Also needs some of the running zombies and the slow poison ones.
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