You didn't address the issue with the clouds at all, look you're still struggling with fundamentals in art, after months, I don't know how but you really have to get a grip on it. To be blunt, the sky doesn't work that way, clouds don't work that way, trees don't work that way, grass doesn't work that way. You need to start looking at images for reference, you should probably be drawing lots of still life and you should probably pick up some beginner art books.
I mean unless you don't care to improve at all, which is fine, you can do what you want, but I haven't seen any improvement from you at all ever since you started posting here, perhaps barely, if you want to be successful you should put the pixels down and start working on improving your artistic ability. I feel like a broken record at this point though, I've said this at least twice and I'm sure others have said similar things to you, this is after-all a critique board, a fairly serious one at that, how can we help you if you don't really get what we're trying to tell you(not to say you can't understand what we mean, its just... you're trying to spell words without knowing the alphabet if that makes sense)? If you don't want to be serious with art and just want to have fun with everything, this really isn't the board to post your work, I'm not saying you can't, I'm just saying maybe this place isn't exactly fit for you (if you don't intend on improving).
I'm not trying to be hurtful, understand, I'm just trying to be honest with you, I personally want you to improve, I'm sure most of us do, I just haven't seen you improve and you keep making the same fundamental mistakes with all your work. Really though, don't take this as a hurtful message, I did not intend it to be, I apologize if you did.