Don't know what to say at such an early stage (bar that it looks excellent so far, of course). So I'll over Analise! ha!
The skirt covering the left leg of the left figure looks like it need to be trimmed back abit as it seems to defy gravity abit.
The composition of the piece is very nice, though if it were me i would stretch the right side out abit to make the figures a little less central. (having the alot of the dark tones concentrated to the left side throws the balance out abit too, stretching out the right side should help fix that).
Late Victorian, Pre Raphaelite Paintings FTW!
lol (thats the vibe I'm getting form this ^_^, am i right?)