Oh my god, titties in my face! 

Uhh, I like the first version better.

lol XD

that is because it was fully done but not in what i planned to get as avatar.

well, i'm still working on the background and i was wondering what do you think about my tree ? (with leaves for moment.) it make me a real pain about colors limitations  so, there the pic :



now, i'm going to make the other trees.... BLARG !

ha yes, i forgot to show it :


i hope you will like this little plushie i made for my game :3

C&C please.

The hero sprite looks good and has some nice/fun design aspects.

Some things that you should consider:

The use of black outlines is very inconsistent - it does not relate to the lighting on the rest of the sprite.
Some of the internal lines of the sprite need a bolder approach to really distinguish volume and depth - particularly the arm.
You should start to think about a game palette that will be used when creating all the assets - this doesn't need to strict but should at least givea unifying feeling. maybe some colours could be strict so that you can give all art and sprites a some colour unity.
The detailing around our left eye is lost.

Anyway I made a quick mockup using your sprites. it illustrating the outlining issue on the enlarged sprite and hopefully shows you that so far the palettes of the background and hero don't mix too well. * the sprite loses priority to the backgound. maybe it'll give you some ideas? ^_^ wouldn't suggest this palette i just used brightness/contrast to alter yours

ow! that is quite an hurst XD anyway, thx for this useful critism ^^ i recently did a little correction on my character but i noticed that you removed the thing on her eyes, it seem that work too well that everyone though it's actually a boy XD and for about the tile, i'm still working on and i see that i forgot to mentionning it : the tile is using the 64x64 system excepted the waterfall because in the original artwork show that size ^^;


there the new version of my character.


and the little mockup with my tile and a little monster that i ripped from one popular game.


and the artwork version of my game that my good buddy unidcolor did for me.
http://img443.imageshack.us/img443/3489/enviromentconceptfn9.jpg

i hope it will be good ^^

hello folks ! sorry for being so inactive these months. i have been working so hard on my game and it came out pretty well and i already got some sprite done by my new buddy and i got a programmer for my game
 
anyway, you can already check my official site but still working on it so, you will just see a simple "coming soon" so, you can also go to my forum that you're welcome to post some message
 
you can too check my blog that you're able to see the avancement.
 
the site :
www.no-frontier.com
 
the forum :
http://forum.no-frontier.com
 
and my blog :
http://blog.no-frontier.com
 
 
now, i'm looking for an other person who can help me to make some landscape and sprite for my game and it would be very welcome !
 
anyway, there the new version of my first level that i'm still working on :



i hope it will be enough good ^^

well, i recently got my buddy and she show me her little idea about my godess of earth. it came out interesting as goddess !

and sorry for this big picture that i can't put here as image ^^; : http://oekakiallaze.free.fr/projet/mail_tale/earthgoddess_concept1.png

so, i will completly redraw my sprite. but for now, i will go to bed.

I'd suggest making it a lot smaller..

I'd go for 80x180 (they might not be perfect, i just thought of it) 80 being width btw..

Anyway, looks good i guess although not a lot to comment on.

roger ! but i wanted to make this character as big as it's like this monster i saw on magical starsign :



or this one from mogura 2



you see what i mean about it ?