Yeah, it does look a lot better, WM; thanks for the tip!
NaCl, I was trying to avoid completely redrawing the arm, but I finally caved and did it. Changed the dress a bit too and haven't cleaned it up yet, so don't mind the weird bits. Before I clean the arm up, do the placement and highlights/shadows and whatnot look right? Something still seems off to me, but I don't know if that's because something is wrong or because I'm so used to it the other way.
EDIT: Okay, I did actually clean it up, but I'm still not sure of it. Shoulder highlight is perhaps not round enough. Opinions?
You know, idk, I sort of preferred it how it was before. I might go back to that version even if it's less anatomically correct.