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Pixel Art / Re: Virginia Maxwell - Wild Arms 3
« on: September 13, 2017, 07:41:58 pm »
Quote from: EduardoPras on September 13, 2017, 04:13:59 pm
Hey Afelium, thanks for the tips. You pointed a lot of things that went under my radar.

I've made a few changes:
-Reworked the hair so that I had more pixels to work with.(Also noticed i had strayed from the model sheet)
-Added a darker tone to the purple parts so i could shadow the belt.
-Reworked her apron thing in the front, it was really lacking depth and needed a lighter tone.
-Gave the gun a bit more detail.
-And thanks for pointing out the belt was golden, I was looking for more leather feel to it and went overboard on the highlights
-And AA here and there to solve some problems.(I can see this becoming quite the crutch, better be careful.)

Here is the new version with the corrections:



Thanks again for the tips, they were really useful.
Happy to be helpful :)
I can't find any errors,I think that there are no more;
Good job

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Pixel Art / Re: Say hi to lobsty(very little gif)
« on: September 13, 2017, 01:52:16 pm »
Nobody says Hi to lobsty? :(

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Pixel Art / Re: Bridge at midnight[WIP]
« on: September 13, 2017, 12:57:41 pm »

managed to fill those spaces under the arches.
Added some drops here and there.
the streetlight on the left is turned off;I'd like to make the glass sphere broken but I couldn't make it  look right,so I leaved it intact

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Pixel Art / Re: Bridge at midnight[WIP]
« on: September 13, 2017, 09:12:23 am »
+1 luckless drunk fisherman

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Pixel Art / Re: Virginia Maxwell - Wild Arms 3
« on: September 13, 2017, 09:04:30 am »
I'm not an expert,but I'll try to be helpful:
I like the pose and also the shading is good(except for the hair,but I see you already noticed it;it could work if you split it in "stripes" by adding dark tones between them,and then add highlight)
i think the left eye overlaps the nose,you should delete one or two pixels on the right part of it.
Also add a dark tone under the golden belt
The brown thing on the skirt maybe needs a light tone

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Pixel Art / Re: Bridge at midnight[WIP]
« on: September 12, 2017, 03:50:09 pm »
^UP^

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Pixel Art / Re: Gaming gif !
« on: September 11, 2017, 08:08:37 pm »
I'm not an expert but I'll try to give some advice:
Is it WIP?the left wall and the wardrobe don't look complete and lack detail/texture.The TV screen is a light source,so there shouldn't be shadow on it(?).The long haired girl's face is too simple and so are the clothes,they look flat.It is a good work so keep it up and improve it

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Pixel Art / Say hi to lobsty(very little gif)
« on: September 11, 2017, 02:30:42 pm »

didn't put much effort into it,but I want to share it anyway
Advice is always appreciated :)

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Pixel Art / Re: Future Mask (WIP)
« on: September 11, 2017, 11:23:09 am »
The concept is cool,but it looks flat;you should make it rounder with better shading(make it darker on the edges if light is coming from the front, and add highlights).Also the four circles on the cheeks have all the same rotation:you should make the inner ones rounder and the other two thinner(same for the eyes).

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Pixel Art / Re: Bridge at midnight[WIP]
« on: September 11, 2017, 10:20:24 am »
Quote from: Xenon02 on September 10, 2017, 10:35:42 am
Well I can show you the images that can help you with it.

I think it will help you. Who know ;D
at least i tried :(

There's something wrong but I don't know what

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