Very nice Afelium, i really dig the idea!

Some things i think were really cool:
-His eyes are awesome, they sell the boss idea.
-The Tie is not hue shifted but the colors works great to me.
-To tell the truth his general face structure is amazing i love it.
-His gigantic size makes for a pretty cool cartoon character.

Here are some things i think you could work on:
-I think you could avoid the pure whites they are really strong.
-You could simplify your clusters, make them bigger and with bolder statements(Specially on the face like Sersch said)
-Try to hue shift all tones
-You used some colors at max like 100% white and 100% Red, try to soften them a bit.
-You can also push a bit your dark values, maybe I misunderstood but it seemed to me it has a strong light from the top.

Here are some notes:


And here's a paitover to show you how Iwould approach it:


And sorry if i messed a bit with the suit design but i really liked your concept and was having a lot of fun with it, since he is really big I enlarged some parts of the suit and made super large brighter masses.

Well, hope this helped you a bit.

coff!coff!...doodle made during lessons by my brother,wish the concept was my idea ...coff!coff

lol

single pixel pollute the image

Hate to be the one but haven't reported you yet

But you're far over triple-posting and now not even updating the original topic

Please include updates or stay on topic at least, others use this forum and need help with their art as well