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lilwing
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[wip] 16 color portrait C+C
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June 05, 2011, 12:31:04 pm
This is my first portrait ever. Spent about an hour on it. What do you think?
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Mathias
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Goodbye.
Re: [wip] 16 color portrait C+C
Reply #1 on:
June 05, 2011, 09:02:20 pm
Canvas size makes it feel cramped. Give it more room.
Only dither skin if you have very closely related shaded. Here, you don't.
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Decroded
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Oh hai
Re: [wip] 16 color portrait C+C
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June 10, 2011, 12:25:32 am
Yeah lose the dithering.
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piffany
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Re: [wip] 16 color portrait C+C
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June 10, 2011, 03:14:26 am
The shadows for the eyes could be darker. Is the character a guy with long hair? The broken line on the left (his right side) breaks the flow of the hair. I think the face is drawn well. How many colours are used?
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Disclaimer: I am still fairly new at pixel art, so please don't be offended by my negative critiques
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