It's pretty good. I especially like the face and hair. I did a quick little edit to try and address some of the anatomy issues that stuck out most to me. I hope you don't mind.
Her left arm was pretty good but i changed the forearm a little to go with the sword better. also I made the shoulder a lil smaller.
I put some gray "bones" in to show whats wrong with the right arm. its close but Id say it needs a lil tweaking.
I really liked the right breast but I felt the left one was to far out. I made it a bit closer- but that might not nesesarilly be more anatomically correct. it just looks better to me that way.
I also made her crotch smaller (since she's so skinny)
I didnt do anything with the legs or feet but they also need some tweaking.
hope this helps keep up the good work.