his sword kinda reads more as a codpiece at 1:1 there, lol
you might want to practice some gesture sketches, get a better feel for fluid posing. As is, the swords clash mightily with the piece since they don't feel like part of the "scene."
Essentially, they're too static compared to the rest of the pose.
I'd also say the arm is a bit short, make it about a pixel or two longer.