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Nice pieces you've got there. The first one has nice dithering patterns as mentioned.
The second one is a typical Morganne piece
. Brilliant texturing, though you have to beware not to get lost in details.
Some pointers:
- HER right breast (our left) has weird shading, it should connect more with the highlight above it. Unless you're trying to suggest shadow from the head, in which case the transition from highlight to shadow needs to be harsher. Also, dithering highlights doesn't work for me, makes the breast look grainy.
- The crotch area: I don't know what to make of it, but it doesn't look right to me.
- The neck: too thin, but I bet that's just because it's not done yet
- The hair: very cool. Seems to be lacking hair on the back though, some stray hair from the back should appear in the negative space between the hair and the arm