Lol im sorry, but immediately when I saw your updated version I seriously said "EW" out loud. that update was more of a downgrade. your older version was better but work on your contrast and highlights. also, your far shoulder doesnt go back as far as it should, theres a pixel between the shoulder thing (the gray piece) and the head which should be filled with gray. also, looking at helms, you'll notice how little colors he used compared to yours, you can do a lot of a small palette and contrast, good luck.