...human league fan per chance?

I look it up, Human League is a few years before my time

here's a slightly updated version, hope it looks better.

not much good at the descriptions, but the clothe I was thinking of is something along the line of a window curtain, not the layer that blocks out the lights, but rather the one that's against the window though without the translucent qualities.

Anway, I'll give it a further attemp so people'll have a better idea of what I mean.

edit: here's a little more detail.

Just the dad and the mom for now, I am making the ogre baby still

Priginally it was just the first one when someone suggested an ogre family and I thought that was a nice idea...


any pointers in improving these appreciated.

stalked by death at every turn...

it's wierd now because of the proportions. His legs are a lot shorter than his upper body. It could be a style choice, but judging from the earlier stages I think you were going for slightly more accurate anatomy.

I was going with a slightly more balanced look, but after looking this over a few times, I notice that proportions was screwed from the beginning anyway so I thought I'd just make it more obvious.

to pull that off, you should make the legs taper.
doing that i think would make it look really cool

Ya, I am trying to make this look less awkward at the moment, shorter neck, bigger head, or taper his legs as you said, just seeing with one, or if all of them will work out.

I cant really be bothered going into nor am I learned of the anatomy, but you have some issues that dont look like a stylistic choice.. everything looks kinda "twisted meat"-like, but for the most part, I like this
one thing that bugs me is the few black pixels, I think it looks much better if you change them to the darkest grey colour

I am not that strong with anatomy, usually just go with what I think looks nice and hope that it doesn't come out too weird, obviously this did came out a bit weird 



anway, thanks for the feedback.