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Pixel Art / Re: I need help with ze faces guys
« on: September 23, 2017, 10:36:07 pm »
I second eishiya's critique all the way.
The only thing slightly useful I could add is that the face of the female looks really really male due to its size. That's because female bones in general are smaller than males -- and despite them being twins, at this level of resolution/distance, you're focusing on something that's not very important in the image in the grand scheme anyway. You can keep their faces similar (eyes/noses), but you have to focus on emphasizing the differences in bone structure (even in the face!) between male/female no matter what.
Your head definitely needs to be smaller on BOTH figures though -- I think you're biased as far as detail level goes, since you're so focused on the idea that they're twins. It doesn't read that way to your viewers though. It really just looks like a male and another male with breasts (if I looked at their faces first.) At least shrink the female face area a little or shrink the jaw.
Lastly, you should consider adding in some saturation at some point in your colors. Even if you're going for a gritty washed-out look, without some hint of "color" mixed with the grays, your image simply appears dull without a hint of color perceivable in one of the shades somewhere in there. The massive use of desaturation will definitely keep the washed-out look, but in this case, you've got to avoid overdoing it by forgetting to add *some* color in there!
The only thing slightly useful I could add is that the face of the female looks really really male due to its size. That's because female bones in general are smaller than males -- and despite them being twins, at this level of resolution/distance, you're focusing on something that's not very important in the image in the grand scheme anyway. You can keep their faces similar (eyes/noses), but you have to focus on emphasizing the differences in bone structure (even in the face!) between male/female no matter what.
Your head definitely needs to be smaller on BOTH figures though -- I think you're biased as far as detail level goes, since you're so focused on the idea that they're twins. It doesn't read that way to your viewers though. It really just looks like a male and another male with breasts (if I looked at their faces first.) At least shrink the female face area a little or shrink the jaw.
Lastly, you should consider adding in some saturation at some point in your colors. Even if you're going for a gritty washed-out look, without some hint of "color" mixed with the grays, your image simply appears dull without a hint of color perceivable in one of the shades somewhere in there. The massive use of desaturation will definitely keep the washed-out look, but in this case, you've got to avoid overdoing it by forgetting to add *some* color in there!