![](http://img14.imageshack.us/img14/5733/streetykappafyg3.png)
Mainly I need criticism on the shell on his tummy and MAJORLY the water on his head (Frills around the water I can work out on my own).
I don't want someone to tell me exactly what to do, because I'd really like to get in depth with this and do well. It's the first productive piece of work I've done in quite some time, and was my first attempt at blotch shading.
![Grin ;D](https://pixelation.org/Smileys/snake/grin.gif)