Yeah, I didn't realize it was a chick till I scrolled down and saw one of your posts. (Yeah, that's right, I didn't read the first post.)
I like the poncho and all, but a more femenine pose would help break up the symmetry that you said you didn't like. Like...what was that thing mentioned in another post...? Contra Pasta? (j/k, contraposto). Yeah, that would, IMO, give her a much more femenine and charactual character.
Also, where are the breastseses?
Also, the crowbar bugs me. I think it should curve back right before it snaps forward in it's classic shape. More like the hair does here.
Like a crow's foot.
Thus the name.
Also, I didn't realize it was her hair at first; I thought it was a scarf.
I like the style so far.
That's alot of "Also"s.
Oh, woo, you posted.
Well, the brestseses don't really have to cast shadows like that. There could just be the implication that they are beneath the cloth by way of either hilight or like, those stretchy horizontal lines you see in busty womens' shirts. (Not that I would know.
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