Hey guys!  I'm completely new to spriting (save a little experience doing doofy recolors and stuff almost a decade ago) and I'm looking to improve.  I've read some tutorials and tried some stuff on, so I'd really like to hear any feedback you guys have!

I've been doing a lot of experimenting, and have two products in a state that I can even remotely show:


(goofed on the transparency here, but I'm having image uploading problems so I can't fix it at the moment)



Tell me what you think.  Thanks, everyone!