since you said you werent going to finish it, i was asking if i could work on it a it. but thats fine.
critique:
-the highlights on his lips need to more similar of a tone, as they are a bit hard to make out as they are.
-there needs to be more of a higlight along the bridge of his nose and along his forhead. his eyes need those white dot things that make em look real.
-his nose needs to be curved in slightly twards the middle
- he needs another nostril. i think i can see where you tried to put it, but it needs to be a bit more visible, because his face looks a bit uneven to me.
- his lips are off center, and need to be moved to (our) right a bit.
-there needs to be another transition color (the violet color) on (his) right cheek
hmm
-if the words are in english or using english charicters, it isnt very legible.