Bah! Love the final edit. I like the fact that you relaxed the shoulders a bit(or at least, you switched the scarf/hankerchef, or however the crap you spell it, with a smaller one to show her hair, hence creating the illusion, that her shoulders have dropped...) , and fixed some of the tiny perspective issues, such as the nostril and lenses.. And butt-chins are sexy, no matter what the public tells you. I like the addition of the darkest purple hue, however, I don't think it should be shown that strong from underneath one breast to another. I would try blending it into the second darkest purple, towards the chest plate, to show more form. I would still love to see her with a black outline though, just to see the difference it makes with, and without one.
Great Job, Al-Ass-Kan Man. Ya dun good, boy, ya dun good...