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Pixel Art / Roof
« on: April 18, 2011, 10:39:51 pm »
Been working hard trying to make something worth posting and I think Ive got it


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I would really like C+C on the colors because mine always seem oddly desaturated or something. Been working on that though so.... yea :)
I might post more if i can make anything else good

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Pixel Art Feature Chest / Re: Growing Cast of Characters for my RPG [C+C] (nude base sprite Half-Kaizer)
« on: April 06, 2011, 11:23:31 pm »
If you do make your own template (witch I certainly recomend :)) make it smaller, even if by only a few pixels, it will be an easier start to learn from.

Quote from: MarianFrae on April 06, 2011, 04:41:03 am
Perihelion--I realize that the size creates a much greater work load for tiles but... I really prefer the amount of detail they allow the sprites. When I've attempted to add things to the smaller sprites, it has ended up being cluttered... so even if I made my own template, it would be close in size... however, I agree with you about the balloon-like style.

I realize smaller sprites can feel clutered but if you work at it they can help you learn to place more perfect "pixel clusters" and make details even more beutiful. My advice is to work your way up to larger sprites. Start small.They dont have to be like 30 pixels tall or anything, though. you know just smaller than now. happy pixeling! ;D

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Pixel Art Feature Chest / Re: Growing Cast of Characters for my RPG [C+C] (nude base sprite Half-Kaizer)
« on: March 28, 2011, 01:21:33 am »
I really love these! ;D I think starting your character base from scratch isnt a bad idea. Your already very good with clothes and I doubt the bases will be to hard for you. Also I second adding a bit more contrast. most of your characters are fine but a few are coming off a bit dull and it dosnt have to be some crazy abstract contrast. Iana seems to have abit of a square boyish figure that I think could be inproved. Also I love when the hair has a bit or shine and is defined in sections not by strands not how your two main characters seem to be. are you using a certain tile size for these? If so how big? (I like the size their at, would like to make some sprites of the same size) :D

Edit: Just thought of this. You should give it an acual shadow. this will help make it look like its on the ground once its in the world. Also IMO it would be a nice touch  ;D

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Pixel Art / Re: [WIP]Forest Scene
« on: March 21, 2011, 05:46:37 pm »
Something I noticed is this area

It draws your eyes away from the focal point (the sword)Im not sure exacly how to fix this but you could try darkening it or adding a few trees in front. Another idea I had to focus on the sword would be to add a beam of light coming from above, on to the rock and the sword.  ;)

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Pixel Art / Re: Japan
« on: March 15, 2011, 01:29:03 am »
really love this!!! :D the only thing is that pacmans mouth looks kinda strange


We love you Japan!!!! :'( Good luck :sry:

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Pixel Art / Yes, its a tree WIP
« on: March 06, 2011, 09:18:21 pm »
Well I attempted a tree but
1 I want it to be top down, not sure if it is
2 dont know how to start with the leaves
3 unsure about the colors


 :-[ wow thats a SAD tree!!!!!!!!

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Pixel Art / Re: [WIP] My First Sprite
« on: March 05, 2011, 08:43:27 pm »
I like it so far but your line art should only be one pixel thick. like this


Also I think the sword should be abit longer and the lump by his right knee seems odd. His legs should probly be shorter and his torso longer by alittle bit. Also his head seems slightly too big. Mabey if you made his sholders a few pixels wider?

P.S. you dont have to add a zoomed image. Pixelation lets you click the image to zoom. :)

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Pixel Art / Re: [WIP] Icaros
« on: March 05, 2011, 01:28:20 am »
alrighty  ;D
finished the edits

I did two just to show some different hair choices even though I belive you were going for blond. If you want blond hair always go abit more golden because hair is never naturaly yellow yellow. Also, I noticed your using what I think is pure white for your highlights and a color that is almost the same as your skin highlight for a second highlight (on the skin). I think you should take the second skin highlight out as you cant even see it. The white highlight looks fine in the wings but not in the hair. Besides that I made the right wing longer and the left slightly shorter. You should probly go or all long feathers or all short feathers with slightly longer feathers near the ends because it seemed odd otherwise though I loved the curving blade like feathers at the ends that you have. Last thing, I didnt do much with the body but lower the skirt but it does need to be changed up. Not really sure how but the legs seem bony or something and the torso kind of weird too.

edit:  I just noticed the dark spots on the wing in my edits
srry please ignore that part! :lol:

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Pixel Art / Re: [WIP] Icaros
« on: March 04, 2011, 02:58:51 am »
I think the whole thing looks alittle noisy exept the band on his upper arm. About that, why only one? Another thing, his hair is very yellow, like lemon merang pie. The right (are right) wing looks shreded and possible a bit small. Lastly I think his skirt thing is a tad to high. I might do an edit tomorrow but tonight its getting late. Good luck!

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Pixel Art / Re: Character dolls (wip)
« on: February 28, 2011, 01:10:12 am »
Thanks Mathais but how would I go about doing that? Would I change the highlights? Would I make the stomach and calves shorter? What to do, what to do?!?  :'(

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