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Pixel Art / Re: Run animation critique!
« on: March 01, 2017, 11:19:40 am »
Really lovely!
I would just say watch the arc on the nose, could flow nicer at the bottom and have a more pleasing path in general. I also thing the rear foot closest to us snaps forward a little too quickly, I would look at bringing the frame after the most extreme forward just a little more. The volume on the tail could use a little more attention also, gets a bit small on a couple of frames. Looking forward to seeing it finished
Edit: The chest also loses its volume at the peak of the leap which gives the impression that its a piece of skin stretching between the two legs, kind of like a sugar glider/ flying squirrel. This isn't helped by the line defining the "armpit" angling straight back like it does at that point.
I would just say watch the arc on the nose, could flow nicer at the bottom and have a more pleasing path in general. I also thing the rear foot closest to us snaps forward a little too quickly, I would look at bringing the frame after the most extreme forward just a little more. The volume on the tail could use a little more attention also, gets a bit small on a couple of frames. Looking forward to seeing it finished
Edit: The chest also loses its volume at the peak of the leap which gives the impression that its a piece of skin stretching between the two legs, kind of like a sugar glider/ flying squirrel. This isn't helped by the line defining the "armpit" angling straight back like it does at that point.