[WIP] Sprite Outline

[Rollerkingdom]

This is my next sprite i am planning to make
but before going into coloring i would like to know any C+C on the line work..
Btw that line on his head it's the part where ill be drawing his hair

[Corinthian Baby]

This looks hella strange man, you may want to find some mid frame walking pose refrences and start with the paint tool instead on an outline of the whole figure. If you start wtih shades then the perspective will be more clear.

[Rollerkingdom]

This looks hella strange man, you may want to find some mid frame walking pose refrences and start with the paint tool instead on an outline of the whole figure. If you start wtih shades then the perspective will be more clear.

I want to create an ALien out of it..

[Kazuya Mochu]

I want to create an ALien out of it..

oh well! then its perfect!

its very hard to judge something just out of its outline and some lines here and there. you should put more effort into the lineart and give is as much information as you need to then proper shade it or color it.

right now it looks like a weirdly proportioned buy with a strange haircut. thats all the linework is telling me. also you've drawn it to look like he's missing one arm

[Rollerkingdom]

I want to create an ALien out of it..

oh well! then its perfect!

its very hard to judge something just out of its outline and some lines here and there. you should put more effort into the lineart and give is as much information as you need to then proper shade it or color it.

right now it looks like a weirdly proportioned buy with a strange haircut. thats all the linework is telling me. also you've drawn it to look like he's missing one arm

How should i draw the other arm because it were supposed to be hidden since he is on side view..
and u mean by giving details such as adding everything like eyes and etc before going to shading + coloring?

[Rollerkingdom]

Here are some coloring so far any CC?



also how can i make an effect of muscle appear on his arm?

[Rollerkingdom]

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