Hello Adarias. Your anatomy is improving steadily. Here is a draw over with various anatomical points. Keep in mind that I am not any sort of expert on anatomy and that a person with real anatomical skillz would think my stuff is hilarious also, but perhaps an intermediate step is good for people trying to become better.
a: your neck constructions are too extended and with too much emphasis on the back-of-neck muscles. This can be a style later on. Right now you need to pull the collarbones up where they should be and make the backs more solid
b:that position of the arm is a common mistake to people who structure humans holding weapons initially. But the human arm would never try to support a weight at that position, the arm would naturally move in the more comfortable state I have drawn it so it may utilise the whole set of muscles on the arm. Never put an arm holding something above the waist in such positions, avoid negative angles.
- the waist is unnaturally thin and cannot support that stance. Avoid supermodel thin waists on warrior women, generally. I'm not saying bulk them up to supermuscle (someone can be trained and conditioned to swing a weapon without looking like Conan) but you're going too far.
c: whereas most other measurements up to there were correct, the length of the thigh is very short.
d: your transition from shin to ankle was hesitant
e: look at more real people's feet in that perspective, I have a feeling you're not getting the shapes right.
If you want to make a woman who is not 8 feet tall (like most women are not) then you need to squish most measurements relatively equally. There *are* women with short legs or short torsos, but when working on anatomical sketches first perfect the perfect models and then work into exceptions.
Good work, generally, but studying of charts is in order more!
here is the psd file to switch my edit off and on as you desire
http://www.locustleaves.com/Girls.psd