Thanks for the comments,
many good points brought up, which I agree with.
I tried detailing the hair, but it turned out crappy. If anyone wants to take a try at it, go ahead.
The perspective on the legs was an afterthought after I had sketched in the body. I realized I would of had alot to pixel if I wanted to pixel her whole character, so I thought, why not make the view looking down at her, that way I'd end up haveing the legs small so it is less to pixel, plus it would have a neat angle and make things alot more dynamic.
The thighs could probably be thicker, but I wasn't certain how thick before the perspective wouldn't look right. If we were to look from the sides, the hip diameter would seem larger than it is now in comparison to the shoulders which at this view is larger..
anyways, alot can be better, but at this point I'm too tired from working on this.
here's my attempt at the hair: