think i'll use this moon variant:
i don't know how to make the redeye look good though, had a couple goes at that already.
i'm still hoping someone will tell be where all the character errors are, i don't know how to check that, short of going through real careful and doing it by eye. which i might do, actually, it sounds like a thing i would do.
while i'm asking for stuff, i'm hoping somebody knows about typography will tell me how they'd do the title texts. do we have a fontspert?