Looks solid to my eyes design ways, but the grey gloves kind of meld into the red of the cloak a bit. Makes it look like it's a pauldron/shoulder guard rather than a gloved hand!
Also, go back over the shading while keeping the light source in mind. It's hard to tell if it's coming from above-left or middle-left because of some inconsistencies on the brim of the hat, the scroll, and the gloves.