Thigh muscle loss?
Yeah, besides the above mentioned, that... vial... thing in his left hand doesn't seem to belong, and if you're gonna put something over his mouth, I'd personally go with a color you've already used (you know, unification, color redux, etc.).
Vandals don't match.
No, I really got tired of those colors.
Hmm, i think all the spraycan needs is perhaps a darker outline, seeing as there isnt much that has such a light outline anywhere else. ^_^ I much prefer the spraycan idea to the glowing hands, although they were pretty neat in their own right.
Yeah, I noticed that just ater posting it. Thanks.
Is that a bandana or a mask? If it's a bandana, i think it should cover more of his cheeks, and it could be longer. When I wear one, I end up having to tuck it into my shirt or coat and it reaches just under my collar bone.
Yeah, it's supposed to be a bandana. His mouth was bugging me. I tried fixing it like you suggested, but I'm not entirely sure of how I did.
couldnt help it.
just because i find your works to all have similar colours and taste so i thought i would change that slightly, thats about all.
Woo! nice edit. I like those green pants. I'll czech out what you did and see if I can do better on my next piece. I did notice that I don't use browns much...
i just realised he barely has a crotch.
Thanks for pointing that out. I'll try to fix it.
Very sexy palette xion. I like your design, but I believe his folds need more work, they seem small and crumply like paper (as you pointed out it seems). Also (perhaps its just the style) your sprite seems somewhat 'hard' it might have something to do with the high contrast folds but I could be wrong. Anyways great job thusfar, keep going!
Thanks. I like the 'hard' style...it makes it look depthy, to me.
Thanks for all the replies, guys/gals[?].
Other things I changed:
The hood's been widened a bit...not sure I like it.
The pants' wrinkles...again, I'm unsure.
Eyes' brow...Ditto.
The hoodie's right sleeve...I think it's an improvement.
...And some other minor things not really woth mentioning.
C&C.
Again, thanks.